Tuesday, November 21, 2006

My Extraordinary Poem 我的奇妙的詩

If I were to write a Valentine's poem, I would write it like this... ...

There is someone I know who means more than words,
Who is free & open like a flock of birds.

This person smiles & always will care,
They love & hold & will forever be fair.

As the moon lays still in the star-lit sky,
This person can hold your hand & fly.

I know how I want to be,
It's just like this person who is free.

My love for you beats as loud as a drum,
You stand out like a sore thumb!

The ocean is ineffable & vast,
So come with me swift & fast.

There is a dreamland that I know,
So come & join me where there is no foe.

My dreams flitter & soar,
They don't ever the deep, dark floor.

Wisps of wind gather around,
But just look at what I've found.

In the air there is a sound,
Coming from a small clearing on the ground.

I think you are extremely unique,
But there is something in you that I seek.

I have no idea of where it is,
It seems to me like a quiz.

There are worlds that I still have to explore,
But they are scattered across the universe galore.

I have been to places,
But I haven't been to some,
I know I have to see one more,
And then I'll be gone & done

Do you like it??? 你喜歡嗎???



3 comments:

Jenna said...

我的電腦以斤修好了!!!!

Jenna said...

any more?
oh yeah, it is not my homework
mr. walsh told me to do it when i had finish my work
he started the poem for me

Jenna said...

謝謝大家給我留下你們的comments.